In short, this is a beautifully crafted story, layered, impactful, and resonant. It handles themes of grief, loyalty, power, and the fragile dynamics of alliance with emotional intelligence and care. Your passion and attention to craft are evident on every page.
Your storytelling ability is exceptional, and I am genuinely excited to see what you create next.
Ephraim June 9, 2025 – The Reason: Book One – Tribe and family.
Man this story is good! It’s relatable and plausible in current times. You go back and forth between the locations and people very well. Lots of detail but aren’t getting lost in the details. I am impressed! I am not usually one who reads much at all but this has got me hooked!
You choose good spots to switch back and forth as well. Leaving the reader wanting to continue so they can see what’s next for each (character’s) prospective. This is some nice work and for a guy who can’t stay committed to a book ever I am this far. Page 120 of book one in just two days. For me that’s unheard of!
J.B. The Reason: Book One – Tribe and family.
Thank you for trusting me with your work. I must say, it’s a remarkable piece, and I truly appreciate the opportunity to read this manuscript. I’m incredibly grateful for the experience.
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Wow! Wow! Wow!
What a remarkable piece! So this is my first time reading a military book, thank you for making my first experience a spectacular read! All I can say is you outdid yourself on this one! Wow! I felt every emotion! I cried, I laughed and was tense. This mix of emotion is really intense and vast, you did a good job bringing them all together.
S. The Reason: Book One – Tribe and Family.
“Final reflection: Tribe and family, the only things worth fighting for.”
C. – The Reason: Book One – Tribe and Family.
The Reason Novel Series 